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I can really see you worked a lot on that shading and the shoes are also something I had a lot of trouble with. Nice ^^
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Vision: I saw this on my DeviantWATCH and it really popped out! It stood out from the rest of the art for sure. It's just so big and colorful, and my brain lurves big and colorful
Originality: Well, I get that you're practicing with cel-shading, and you're just experimenting, but I wish you could've done something else in the piece, or make her in a slightly different pose. It's just...I've seen a pose like this before many times. Though I definitely think that this pose is hard, so I understand that this may be just as difficult as a more original pose.
Technique: I love the shading you did here! Good idea on keeping it minimal, since Celestia resembles sun, light, day. (On the other hand, Luna may need more shadows to stick to the "moon, dark, night" theme.) Also, on one note, I think you made the hooves a bit too wide. They look bigger than her head! It's sort of overtaking the picture a bit. Also maybe next time, you could make her neck a little less skinny. And as mentioned before, I think shading in the mane and tail, or adding a background, or even some textures, would make the piece stand out more.
Impact: The shading you tried here gives a huge impact on the whole thing! But again with the hooves; they seem to take over the picture here. My eyes keep moving to the hooves. But wow, this picture really blows me away! Keep practicing, and maybe work on some pony anatomy (it's hard to keep them proportional when they're sitting or lying down!), and you'll continue to impress me!
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